Interesting. I like the last two lines.

This has some really beautifully descriptive lines, I especially liked the bit about white lace and red satin. and the end is wonderful, so matter of fact, it fits perfectly. x

whoa...this is inspired...definitelyat first i thought it was just a canvas that need the artist's touchbut then...the whole corpse thing just shook me...m cooland the ending lineThe empty canvas is now splattered with blood.- creepy but good

I especially love the last line, it just hits you like a brick in the face. Great work you have here.

love the lines: 'Shreds of white lace,

Scattered over the body,

Glaring against the red satin...'nice work, keep it up :)