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| Monster In Your Head 2006-06-27 ch 1,   | wow angst. lol nice and short but good. |
| myheartwantsyou 2006-05-07 ch 1, | very well written and what a lot of people feel. like they armt worth much. i am religious but my relifion is a bit diffrent... lol. band camp rocks! |
| swtdreamz101 2005-11-11 ch 1, | wow...sinister. m who is benefactor of this pain?must've been awful what they did to youeither that...or this person is just too submissive to say anything about it.the ending lines repeat in a good wayreally tells the reader that you're feeling exactly that.good job |
| youzi 2005-11-11 ch 1, | there is a lot of raw emotion in this piece.. do keep writing :D |
| deathfairy20 2005-11-11 ch 1, | very good keep up the excellent work and keep writing you're very talented =) |