wow angst. lol nice and short but good.

very well written and what a lot of people feel. like they armt worth much. i am religious but my relifion is a bit diffrent... lol. band camp rocks!

wow...sinister. m who is benefactor of this pain?must've been awful what they did to youeither that...or this person is just too submissive to say anything about it.the ending lines repeat in a good wayreally tells the reader that you're feeling exactly that.good job

there is a lot of raw emotion in this piece.. do keep writing :D

very good keep up the excellent work and keep writing you're very talented =)