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| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-11-17 ch 1,  | abuseVery cool and exciting. Loved your simplicty of words to capture its theme of paranioa. and I loved the rhythm. |
| simpleplan13 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abusecreepy and well done |
| Steppenwoelfin 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the reference to the myth of Daphne and Apollo. Very well written piece - the repetition gives the poem a rushed, urgent feeling. |