Wow
i read this story again and it just sounded better than the first time i read it
And a peace of advice remove the warning note this story is awesum and i think evryone deserves to read it...And im really lookin forward in reading other stories of urs!

Wow! I don't know why you thought it was so bad. It's getting pretty late where I live, but I had to stay up and finish it because I couldn't wait until in the morning to do so. = )

I get bored very easily with stories but this one was no where near boring. I couldn't stop laughing. The ending was really cute, go job on this story.

This is such a humorous story! I was laughing my ** of half the time LOL :P great job ^.^

Oh. my. god. I don't know what you were talking about, That was great! I loved it so much! So perfect! ^.^ I'm glad you didn't take it down, It is wonderful. ^.^

I like it. So... First step would be to put up an actual summary. Stop dissing yourself when your story is perfectly fine.

I know that you're your hardest critique but lowering yourself esteem won't do anything to help.

Have some confidence. Think, 'I write well and I'm going to keep writing till I perfect it!' Instead of, 'I suck.'

Yeah? We're cool. I'm not going to act like a mum anymore. I think I scared myself there. Lol.

Well, great going.

i take back everything I said, I'm sorry. I've read most of your other stuff, and those rock, but this time you were right. This story sucks, but you are a good author, this story just sucks.

I want an actual summary. If you really hated this story you'd just take it down already, you're just looking for attention and compliments.

I can't believe you don't like this story, you are crazy! It's one of my new top favorites. I think everything worked perfectly and I wouldn't want a thing changed in it.

OMG, I cannot believe you wwant to take this stroy down. It's one of my favourites. Please, please, please don't take it down. I've read it like a milion times. So please don't take it down!

Oh mistletoe... my favorite evil holiday tradtion that makes you question everything!

I love Abu! Such a cute chapter... and I would have fainted if I found my brother in bed with my best friend. The idea actully makes me cring

I can see why you think this story is so horrible. I mention them since I'm pretty sure you more than realize what they are... but despite it all, it is pretty interesting so I can see why people like it. Which is not to say that you're not a good writer because I'm sure it takes one to differentiate good from bad writing, especially when looking at their own work. And I know you're an awesome writer because Hit or Miss turned out really well!!

This is such a great story! Don't Get ride of it!

awesome story, nearing the end i think it got a lil cheesey but it woz still really really gud:D. i enjoyed it heaps! please dont EVA delete it, no matta how horrible u think it iz! its GREAT. lol. ok, im gonna go now.
rock on:)