Hey great story! I really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing!

Somehow this story feels a little bit too cliche. But i love it! The story is light and funny. I wish you would go deeper with each of the character. Keep writing good stories! :)

Wasn't there a sequel to this? From what I remember, it was written better and I enjoyed it more.

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Loved it!

I loved it! I was a little worried when I read the summary, but wow it was so good!

This seems like a really cute story :)

loved it! nick is so cutee :):)

sequeal coming?

Wasn't there a sequel to this story? Where did it go?

Okay you can probably ignore my earlier review cos quite a few things were resolved in the rest of the story.

Aw they're so cute! I love nick :) he's a sweetie.

Oh, the wedding is for the sequel. My bad lol.

Whoa I haven't read this in ages! After seeing that you're writing a new story i thought I'd revisit this cos i liked it. Its been way too long cos I think I've forgotten a lot. For some reason I thought it started when Frankie & lily are getting married? But maybe that's later on. Or I've made that up lol.

Anyway, just wanted to say that your writing has changed a lot since this story. As much as I like this story, i think the plot and characters could be smoothed over a little if you decided to edit this. I'm a little confused cos I thought Vinny & grace were old friends but they seem like strangers/acquaintances? And is Frankie a paramedic?

I was just wondering how come nicks mum doesn't really know grace, since Frankie & nick are best friends wouldn't she know them a bit better? But there could be a stou behind that that I haven't gotten to. I hope I'm not offending you or anything, just a few things I noticed. I'm still gonna read this story for old times sake :) and I did like this story, wasn't there a sequel? One last thing, I'm not too sure where you're from, but I'm studying nursing in Australia and for children, during an emergency situation we don't need to get consent for treatment. Just thought I'd let you know, I know it's a story and stuff but yeah ... Lol anyway, this turned out a lot longer than expected! Sorry, anyway hope this helped a little and wasn't offensive or anything!

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