Reviews for Love Not Even The Heart Understands

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Agony of the Heart 2008-10-11 ch 20,	abusePLEASE DON'T TAKE THIS DOWN! I LOVE this story... It's one of my all time favorites! And what happend to the other story? IT was like the squeal I LOVED that story too. You shouldn't dought your writing it's really good! or at least I think it's really really good and I read a lot... and trust me you are a great writer! I've read this story like 16 times!
Once Upon a Time is Forever 2008-10-05 ch 20,	abuseI think that you were to harsh on yourself. yes, the story has a couple of rough spots and the writing isn't amazing, but the plot is really good and it was fun to read. So, thanks for a great read!
emmerrzz 2008-09-25 ch 20, anon.	abuseaaw...that was so cute:) i love happy endings like that! very cute indeed...im really upset its complete though..cuz i just wanna keep reading and keep reading...=D haha...keep up the good work!
eka 2008-09-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo I'veonyl read aobut halfway through the first chapter, and I feel that I can't continue until I get this point across. That flashback scene with the "pit bull"? NO. For one, "pit bull" is not a real breed of dog, its is an assumed name for a type of dog, and most people who use it do not know what it means, except for that stupid stupid stereotype that "pit bulls" are some kind of vicious human eating dog who will attack any person provoked or not. And your scene fuels that godforsaken stereotype. You're probably going, oh she's making a big deal over nothing. However, there are very few things that ** me off more that the wrongly concieved bad press over "pit bulls", stemming from ignorant people mistreating these types of dogs to be "guard dogs". And if one wants to fight such a widespread misconception, one has to take every opportunity. So I'd greatly appreciate it if you could take those two small but significant words out, replace with dog maybe, although such behavior isn't characteristic of any dog that hasn't been mistreated, it'd be better. Thanks.
The Agony of a Headcold! 2008-09-22 ch 20, anon.	abuseThis is a really good story!
LookintomyBlueyedDestiny 2008-09-17 ch 3,	abuseOk. You have a good story here, but the jokes and sarcastic coments seem a little cheesy, fake. I also noticed you're ending every chapter open-ended and its a little annoying. Otherwise, my rating for this story is a 3 on a scale of 5.
dlovely 2008-08-09 ch 20,	abuselove your work :) i'm in love with your characters!
brokencrystal7 2008-07-01 ch 20,	abuseit took me a while but i finished the story. I LOVED...NO, I LOVE IT! this is a wonderful story and i love the characters! hope you can check out my work. you did an amazing job with this story and you always kept my interest throughout the whole story. :)
Amaryllis Faye 2008-06-29 ch 20,	abusethats really lovely :) thank you for writing it!
annie 2008-06-20 ch 20, anon.	abusehey. The story was sweet, I read it in one sitting. But I kind of felt it left some loose ends especially with that one guy Gracie left back from where she used to live? Or was he the gay one? well.. anyway. it was still a good story
-RomanticallyCliched- 2008-05-09 ch 20,	abusesweet! gtg. i have to read ur sequel. bye! lol
faithful.dream 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abusethis is my FAV !!
toazdo 2008-02-03 ch 20,	abuseaw... That was so cute! I loved it!! Thanks for writing it =)
toazdo 2008-02-03 ch 8,	abuseThat's weird..Frank got all over protective and stuff when he found out that they're pretending to date but not when he caught them making out? That doesn't make any sense but I'm liking the story so far =)
shy green rock 2008-01-25 ch 20,	abuseFantastico! I loved it. I mean no other story has a crazy monkey in it, just kidding. I love how they think they hate each other, but they keep on finding stuff out about each other that only makes them like each other even more. So now I'm off to read the sequel. Good Job!

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