aw, how cute! Nick seems like a real sweetie in this chapter and i definately want them to hook up for real! haha. keep up the great work and get the next chapter up very soon!

How adorable . .aww . . .(cooing) She's finally having hormones! Update soon!

i hate toni. shes evil. but the chapter was cute. nick and gracie are adorable! update soon!

AHH! I love your story. Its soo good.

Heyy Buttcheek. Usual mistakes. I like-no, LOVE when Abu attacked the Bimbo! Stupid bitch...lol...good chapter. ttyl.

you have all the ingredients here to be a great story

hahah i love it!

I absolutely LOVED that kiss! And the chole chapter. I was smiling the whole time I was reading it! Can't wait for the next one to read about their next kiss under the mistletoe! :P

THIS IS MYY FAVVOURTIE CHAPPTERR! YAY theyy kised..i loove this storyy..update son love it..i think i am obsessed;)...awesoomme bloody brilliant

Love it the kiss and abu was great and can't wait for more.

Wonderful! I loved the length and that this chapter followed the trail of my thoughts. You did the right thing - it flows so well and I won't say it was because of my idea because it wasn't. It was just the natural course of action when a bitchy, blonde bimbo is in the picture.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Silver

that was a great chapter:) very well done:)

I love this story. It's cute. I love it that he's a detective. There aren't enough good cop/detective-type stories on here. Please update soon.

I love it... Update more...

I love it. This chapter is really really awesome. So please update soon. I love the characters and can't wait to check out the character pics. This story's plot is awesome and the characters are well developed and easy to like. Update soon!