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| The Queen Of Dark 2005-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseshort, and yet so beautiful. |
| addie pray 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseYum, tongue twisters. Really beautiful language and word use, though. Bootlace of existence. Props on that one especially. |
| FELICIA-SPENCER 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm not gonna lie...I needed to grab my dictionary for this, but boy when I did this poem spoke volumes. This was wonderfully done, and it reminded me of a sunset that I recently saw that had a somewhat purple hue to it. It was truly something beautiful to see. This poem reminded me of that. Anyway this is pure perfection in all it's form, and I'm so jealous that I can't write this good. Keep up the amazing work. |
| simpletonsgrin 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseYour vocab (mainly in the first line) renders this a bit cryptic to some of us- but maybe I'm just complaining about the fact that your knowledge of the lexis is far more extensive than mine. Still, superficially, it's still quite beautiful.I'll get back to you on whatever profound meaning you'd set to it. I'm sure it's equally as pleasing. -simpleton |
| HellHeartedlyBent 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseput a smile on my lips, truly enjoyed. pretty in small spaces. (whats xiphoid? |
| account not in use 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abusei love your vocabulary. nice imagery. |