 em 2007-11-29 . chapter 2 Well...you haven't updated since 05! Is there even a reson to see if you update? |
 kuron 2006-10-08 . chapter 2 HOJO-DONO! It was so swet -hearts- But is that it? -sniff- I want to read more! |
 pwner 2005-11-13 . chapter 2 Still a good story, even after reading it as you edited. *applauds*Good luck and keep up the good work |
 Acerbitas 2005-11-13 . chapter 2I like this story, as I've told you before! It's so good. You're good at original storytelling. I try, but I'm not. I want you to continue this, it's really good! I like both of the brothers, especially their interaction with each other. Keep on going! |
 RiyojiJeremishou 2005-11-13 . chapter 1x.x |
 RiyojiJeremishou 2005-11-13 . chapter 2KITY!X3 |
 Acerbitas 2005-11-13 . chapter 1This is a good introduction, and it gives the time that the story is taking place. I like your analysis of people--it can be so true. I really like it. On to the first chapter! |