|Reviews for Balcony|
| simpleplan13 11/17/05 . chapter 1
very creepy and well done... awesome piece
| hiding behind amber eyes 11/12/05 . chapter 1
i like the part "my stomach dropped..." that was good. i like this, very though its dark. good job
| T. Rowland 11/11/05 . chapter 1
very powerful...you captured heaps of emotion in a small space. well done.
| Faithless Juliet 11/11/05 . chapter 1
I like how you keep coming back to the point, of rewriting it and then writting it again; the memory of it. I really enjoyed it.