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| simpleplan13 2005-11-17 ch 1,   | very creepy and well done... awesome piece |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-11-12 ch 1, | i like the part "my stomach dropped..." that was good. i like this, very though its dark. good job |
| T. Rowland 2005-11-11 ch 1, | very powerful...you captured heaps of emotion in a small space. well done. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-11 ch 1, | I like how you keep coming back to the point, of rewriting it and then writting it again; the memory of it. I really enjoyed it. Juliet. |