I doubt you remember me, but...

was really good. The end, was unexpected to me. This reminds me of people I know. Interesting.

You...

you write well.

i like how you've given us glimpses into the life of the character (persona?)... the exoticim of "obscure indie rock" and "Tibetan incense"..do keep writing :D

this is a little strange i must admit lol im afraid i dont really understand it tho...