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ella3114 2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Oh,I really envy you,you know.Because you always makes a great story everytime.And this story is one of the best I've read after the story called "Fatal Misconceptions" which were a great story also. ;)
soaps'nsuds 2009-04-02 . chapter 1
OMG. that was a major cliffhanger.:P

GAR. i can't believe you did that.T_T

added to favorites. i'm such a sap.:))
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-06 . chapter 1
This was sweet...I liked the style it was written it. It does need some editing (like you mentioned in your profile) if only to make it smoother flowing. Otherwise, good job!
friend 49 2008-08-18 . chapter 1
AH THIS WAS SO CUTE.

(:

I really liked it.

Great job, Jenina! (:
Nina 2008-07-04 . chapter 1
beautiful (:
Ayra Amer 2008-04-12 . chapter 1
wonderful i cried so wonderfull!
LovelyxXxDreams 2008-04-12 . chapter 1
I Love it! But at the top where it say author confuses me. Is that a part of the story or did someone else write it?
x3life 2007-12-07 . chapter 1
aw cute storyy!! haha with a such a happy ending. i really didnt expect it
lolitadoll 2007-10-10 . chapter 1
hm interesting
it was suspensful and mature
i liked the chocolate symbolism!
crazygrl2468 2007-10-07 . chapter 1
haha. i love it
its so sweet. and different from other stories i've read.
oh and i love chocolate so thats a plus =]
AK Vita 2007-09-18 . chapter 1
aws so sweet
Lily Llynn 2007-09-17 . chapter 1
This is so sweet - just like chocolate. :D Can't help but love fluff, hehehe. *adds to c2*
Kimberli Kitten 2007-06-19 . chapter 1
I sure do love happy endings! ^^

But really, that was good. I like what you did with the alternating time periods. It made the story really interesting and gave it a unique quality.
Pinkamoo 2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Your a really good writer, I like your stories! Its very well written!
luv me like no other 2007-05-19 . chapter 1
You make hopeless romantics smile.
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