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Reviews For: The Girl and The Flames

Dalik Taltoka
2006-03-14
ch 3,
kl storyI almost thought the girl had no name...
Eric Lupin
2005-12-16
ch 3,
Poor kid, glad she's not evil herself though! And I wonder how the little boy survived! Maybe he's a water boy or something! I huess she could evaporate him... Well, I don't nknow why, but there are couple of places in this story where there are 1/4 signs, I don't quite know why, though! Anyways, keep up ther great work! Please update this soon!
Eric Lupin
2005-12-16
ch 2,
Fire IS quite cool, I must admit! I wouldn't use it for evil though! I'd use it to, uh, *thinks of pleasant use for fire* warm up homeless people, or the elderly! Elderly people rock! Don't ya think they're so much nicer than loadsa other people?
Eric Lupin
2005-12-16
ch 1,
Hey, this is creepy! Cool, but creepy! *Checks around for flame girl* Phew! I', safe... or am I?! ...That was random (me not the story! It's good!) On to the next chapter!
colorcrystals
2005-11-13
ch 3,
I liked it. What are the 1/4 about?
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