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| SummerMindset 2006-04-15 ch 1,   | Very sad, but well written. =) |
| jessa faerie 2006-03-24 ch 1, | oh my goodness. it was beautiful and i cried so much. its so sad and poetic. keep writing. xoxo |
| Whispery 2005-11-12 ch 1, | This is really great writing. I hope your planning on makeing a nice long book out of it..But I have a suggestion. Use what you have as a prolog and then move on to years before when the two just met, bring the story up that way. But for all I know, your plannin on doin that>.> But good job. Few spelling erros and such, but over all good writing. |