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| Sica 2006-12-07 ch 1,   | Haha, wow. That was funny. |
| Hazeleyed Everglades 2006-08-27 ch 1, | ROFLMAO Oh MYGOD! That was hilarious! It rhymed, and it flowed beautifully, and the TWIST! *giggles* It was adorable! I so did not see it coming. :] |
| Wesren Toritan 2006-06-22 ch 1, | Yes! that is pretty darn funny, and a good twist. Other than being funny... not much else but you probably didn't intend it to be "deep" :) made me chuckle... |
| Xenila Poe 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Hahah I love it. It seems like all the hot ones are. Wow... good job. |
| Jodirium 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Ah-hahaha. That was wicked hilarious. - Signed as J. |
| trash can art 2006-03-02 ch 1, | I did not see that coming!! |
| Pyrgus 2006-01-06 ch 1, | I love this. It almost made me cry. The fact that she got the courage built up to ask him out and then find out the truth(?) about him. I totally loved this though. |
| StarboardSide 2005-12-10 ch 1, | Very nice. I like it.I couldnt really understand if it was supposed to rhym or not, but other than that it was very good. |
| AnGeLs-WeEpInG 2005-12-10 ch 1, | I started chuckling at the end. I mean I fell bad, but its funny. Great poem though |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-12-01 ch 1, | Oh, the irony. Love it. |
| RomanticBlonde 2005-11-27 ch 1, | Hey, yeah, that'd be cool...I'll have to check into that...I'm in a slight writers block with the Burnout story, so you just helped a whole bunch!Danielle |
| Element Queen 2005-11-20 ch 1, | Doesn't sound much like the sixth former I'm thinking of (Chris?). I agree with most of the other reviews (I'm too lazy to write much of my own :P), the flow was good and the semi-rhyming went well. It wasn't ROFL funny because I guessed the ending about 5 lines in, but it did tug the corners of my lips. Gosh, don't I sound like a party pooper, -_- X |
| Saturnus 2005-11-17 ch 1, | Hi, thnx for the review, I was chocked how did you find it :P A very nice work, it ended in a wierd and unexcpeted way yet I liked the flow, I couldn't stop untill I read it throw :) have a nice day! |
| Chocopop 2005-11-13 ch 1, | Classic. Just perfect. Seriously, it made just burst out in laughter! ^.^ I'm still chuckling. Chocopop x PS: I'm so lazy, so I'll: a) Read b) Review and c) Write soon! |
| Daemon-FoxFeather 2005-11-12 ch 1, | No! He can't be...! That was definately an ending I wasn't expecting! Unfair! Anyway, it's a good poem, I really liked the ending. You did a great job.-Daemon- P.S. Okay I've reviewed so many of your stories but none of them have shown up. It's happed with others as well. Hopefull this one works, or I'm am going to kill my computer!P.S.S. About my story, what do you mean type slower? I am so confused by that. Please explain! |