Bad Josh! Bad Bad Bad! Gr. And they kinda amitted their feelings for each other... -insert fangirl scream- off again!

Aw, CONTACT HAS BEEN MADE! Lol... How cute, they like each other! Off to the next chapter!

OMG! I didnt know you were doing a revised version... Last version made me cry, Hopefully this one doesnt.

So far I must say, I like it! This chapter was written very well, and now Im off to read the next one!

All my stupid typos from my other review. Can't* wait for the rest other* believeable then* Sorry for the typos was in a hurry.. Heh.

Great so far. More believablethen the othe, but I still love the other. Keep up the great work. Can wait for the rest.

OMG! What a great bedtime story! You put a smile on my face.

Dave is so cute! Everytime he blushed, I was like "aw!" And so clumsy too... always running into people. :P

Adrian is just awesome. Not your total flamboyout (sp?) gay guy. I can't stand those. They're more girly than am I... well... wait... that doesn't take much.

*ahem* Anyway... *gets down on knees* May I please, please, beta this story? *puppy eyes*

That didn't sound desperate in any way. No sir... you didn't hear any desperate-ness in that! I shall e-mail you! *half-crazy grin*

YAY! You updated! ;) I've been keeping an eye out for one. I really love this story. I love the first one as well, it made me cry and broke my heart.(Cries and sniffs!) Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!! TTFN! ;)

ooh, i LOVE that song! n aww! dave! *hugs* i read the first version only a short time ago, n i must say this is an improvement [tho im not sayin i didnt like the last version! it was cool, if sad ending..] and is shaping up really well! ^_^

this is the sex. o_o Keep it up?

oo great story id love for you to keep writing! dave is a great character i can completely relate to him keep it up!