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| Chandra-Moon 2005-12-19 ch 1,   | I really liked this. "maybe if i search for long enough i will find my own face/...maybe you have been everywhere, somehow." "and maybe that/is who you are." I don't know any better way to express my enjoyment then to show you the places I really liked. I myself am guilty of looking at people's myspaces that I don't know--looking at their pictures and wondering about their life. What inspired them to take that photograph? Are they happy? So it made me smile to find a poem about that emotion. I was a bit confused if the last section was part of the entire poem or an afternote, though. Good job, keep writing. |
| Cyssel 2005-11-13 ch 1, | I like the images that all tie together very nicely. I also enjoyed the quick transition from image to image, which seemed to bring to mind the picture of... a camera shutter? Eloquently written anyway. |