Again, an interesting poem. Enjoyable to read, though the punctuation and formatting felt a bit odd sometimes. But, still, well done.

I enjoyed it thoroughly, your imagery, your word choice, and the way everythng flowed was wonderful.

P.S. Thank you for the honest review of my poem, it's appreciated.

I really like your poetry, I really do. As the gravity of the search for the underlying truth is relieved, your poetry replaces it with irony and playfulness. Something comes across, something very important to our lives, but I can't really articulate what it is or how it comes across.