also a very strong piece, does kind of force you the kind of questions, what are we here to do? to learn or have fun? I liked the repeating of the first two lines as the last two lines too.

) I really liked your poem! It's really good! It's what it really IS like at school!

ALLRIGHT! Mez is BACK! Awesomeness. Word flow is freakin wonderful. Thought provoking and detailed. YES! This is the Mez i know

I like this a lot. Well thought out and well written. Great work! QueenVixta

oh, lyric poem?i dont know, just reminds me of something.

i found out what school was. when you are overworked

hah, i liked this. at first you think it's gonna be humorus, but it actually makes you think. very nice!

Thanks for the review!Hey, can you give me a random topic?Perfectly captured poem, btwdreamcatcher920

this poem i thought was going to be funny because of the topic chosen, but its actually a thinker. school is supposed to be a place for learning and growth but instead you can sometimes find yourself facing cruelties that you wouldn't even have to go through just walking down the street and facing the real world.

i really like this poem. good job.

it is, and does all of those things, well captured.