This story was deep, regretful, melancholy, meaningful, and horribly depressing.
I loved it.

-speechless-

you don't need some review to tell you that you have written a masterpiece. you know what you did.

This is such a good story, and the prequel is great too. I cried when I read both.

This is an interesting beginning, honey. I like your imagery and setting, you always get it exact. I wonder why you always choose such depressing settings though? O__O. Every story of yours that I've read so far seems to have a really unpleasant setting.

I do love your style of writing and when I read the last few lines, I got goosebumps. I think I quite like this. However, it's late, so I'm gonna read more of it tomorrow.

OH! And! I found you that film, so where's your update? HMM? ^o).

P.s. what did you think of the film?

That was beautiful. I love the way you use a light and darkness to create a feel and even though the sky can't really shine down on you, specially the gray one, the description was great for creating the feeling of melancholy; and that instead of just saying blonde you used sunshine that at the end turned in ash, very lyrical. You are really good in creating the images.

well, that was depressing. love your style, though.

Okay, I remeber reading this story a while back, and never acutally got around to a review or anything, and now I've just sat here and re-read it, and was like, whoa, I love this story. It's just so beautiful and heart-wrenching, and well, I love it, and Ayah kind of reminded me of someone I used to know, and at first I felt sad, because that person is no longer in my life, but at the same time, I felt happy, because I remembered how she lived, and not how she ended...

Hm, I guess that's all I wanted to say, besides that I love your stories, especially this one. It actually inspired me to write another story, but, yeah, I'm fixing it and adding it to something else. AH, now I'm rambling... Bye!

that was so sad, you're a great writter...

i hate sad endings. =(
But you wrote the story so well i cant be mad at you. T_T
I cried though...
*also feels ashamed*

i thought this was one of the best stories i've read in a really long time.
i loved ayah. (:
reminds me a lot of the characters i usually have.

this was so sad, and had such a perfect ending.
i loved it.
amazing.

I know this story is old ut it made me ball my fucking eyes out, and I havent cried in almost two years.
-feels ashamed-
You have some sad imagination bunny. Beautiful.

You know, this story kind of reminds me of the song "Last Kiss" by Pearl Jam. It's sad and sweet. I love your stories, your a fantastic writer.

That was sad!! Sweet, but sad. I liked the optimist ending and then being faced with the harsh dose of realism. Lovely, I think I adore your writing now. ^^

aw... *frowns* poor Ayah... the ONLY thing that I can complain about is that I could not really get attached to Ayah, we got to know him almost too personally (yes I read the little journal spin-off likt thing) too quickly. But other than that I loved the story *cookies*

Wow, just wow. Completely blown away. Utterly compelling and devastating. You really know how to bring the characters and story to life.