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| simpleplan13 2005-11-20 ch 1, | i love that last line... awesome job |
| Tasbeeh 2005-11-13 ch 1, | that was beautiful. i think that this is one of your more...evolved pieces. i rarely read poetry that really inspires me to write, but this one was just so beautiful. I love the matephors and symbolism,it gives the poem character, and i think you should experiment with poems youve already written and you might notice that they can be improved. thanks for sharing. |
| hey maria 2005-11-12 ch 1, | I love the feelings this evokes, the way the rhymes flow so smoothly...this is a truly beautiful poem. |