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| xhaiiro 2008-07-22 ch 1,   | This is very well-written. I liked it a lot. |
| Dysthymia 2007-04-30 ch 1, | Ok, this is the last review (at least until you submit another poem). I like it. All of your poems are very good. You can review my story if you like. |
| Comawhite13 2006-04-13 ch 1, | I like it. It's full of imagery and very real and very fake at the same time. |
| Anna178 2005-11-18 ch 1, | Well this certainly is angst. This poem is incredibly true to life, I just watched a movie about this sort of lifestyle so I can really see where its coming from. Powerfully painful, the truth sucks **. Brilliant Poem ANNA |
| Kelly I 2005-11-12 ch 1, | That was awesome! really nicely written. Hope to hear more from your work. |
| Smoky Bear 2005-11-12 ch 1, | "My wordsBeat down the doorTo a revolution." - marvellous. i love tripping it's a portal - never stole sunglasses (or anything else, lol) to get high, though. top poem. |
| OverdoseDelusion 2005-11-12 ch 1, | This is great, I love it! It flows really well and it's written very well also, ,You should definitly keep writing ^-^ |
| ayadora 2005-11-12 ch 1, | Pretty damn cool in a "cafe poetry" kinda way. |