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| bittersweet.season 2006-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseYou have sme kind of disturbing poems in here, but i loe them allthe same. Its like you didint try to hard, and all this is just you speaking. I really really enjoyed these. |
| writerforever 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseA very interesting and unique piece. |
| Herminia 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. It's really intense and emotional. I particularly liked the lines: "I am bored./I am slow./I am tired./I just have to know.". Once again, good job. |
| Niki Lemonade 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abusemy, how random. beatiful, and refreshing like a brand new spoon. |
| FunkyFlower17 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseokay...this is good but i still dont get how these aren't poems...sorry, my brains are scrambled right now...it would be easier to read if each one was put as a seperate chp but otherwise, i really like them...especially the first one. theres loads of description and imagery, great job...and thanx for the reviews...and as 2 ur questions for our (ang-dev) story 'love or loyalty'...i dont hav an answer as 2 why david's eyes r so sparkly or why the sky's so blue...but there are other survivors...they'll be in the next chp which i'm currently writing...we'd love it if u can read the next chp but just remember...it's really cliched so *shrugs*. anywayz, thanx again and good luck, ~mez~ aka ang |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseWow...what's weird, is most of it made complete sense to me. Especially the last part. And the part involving flutes and violins. I liked it, it's GREAT! ANd makes me happy. I'd add it to my favorites, but I won't because your already on my fav. authors, so I consider it silly to put fav. authors on fav. stories...if that makes sense. Thanks for reviewing my story, I'm surprised people like it so much...I was afraid I might throw too much truth into it, but than again you haven't met the Freshman yet. *smiles evilly* No one will like it once he comes, although he is rather cute... Anyway. THis is about you. You rock. It makes me happy. Write more poetry! And more of the world by the swings, because that made me happy too. Blessed be! |
| CerriC 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I'm feeling lazy. There were a few typos, but bleh. I hope your mom doesn't take as long as I do to get around to doing things! I'll have a new chap up soon, I hope. All in all, I liked this. I'm not sure what to call it, but I liked it. My friend and I sat here reading it whilst I read aloud the parts I liked best. ^_^ |