Man. Just ohmygoshsobeautiful.:D It's almost heartbreaking. You manage to capture emotions in such a simple, honest voice...LOVE YOUR WORK!! "The warm weight on your stomach as she sprawls across you/The ache as you cradle your head against her arm/Knowing and not caring that she’s using you" WOW. This poem is so delicate...my heart aches for "you". Excellent work!

o.O. So pretty! Sign on sometime... Spacing is most annoying thing in the world/

Someday when you're famous i'm going to be able to say:

"i remember one of the nights i spent in her room we spilled candle wax all over the bedsheets"

and people will look at me funny but secretly they'll be jealous because i knew you BEFORE you were famous.

very nice. Yeah, i'm not too fond of the 'spacing' idea, either. but it's a really good poem.

*mutters* FP is a jackass regarding the formating. I can not use brackets (which I am REALLY fond of) or correctly space my poetry. so I sympathise with your plight. :'(

loved this. per usual in my reaction. but; hey, you are brillant. :) love it. love it.

~* noelle