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| elliebelle 2008-06-03 ch 2,  | abuseomg more please! a few typos, but nothing big. grammars good, except passersby, not passerby's...but i do that myself to ** the ** out of people ..sometimes. hah, anyways. so this is good. i really like ALL of your stories. i hope you keep updating them. especially Second Hand Soda. i fall out of my chair every time i read it. So please update more! hah -els |
| Bob 2008-06-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseMas por favor! |
| Obsessive Pyromaniac 2008-05-27 ch 2, | abuseI luv the story! I wish I could be that kick-**... Update soon! |
| Haruku 2007-11-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis story is he11a crazy... I love it!^_^ Man, I read your story 'Second Hand Soda' and I was lol-ing at it the whole time. Then I read this one and I was really impressed by how you have the cliche thing and twist it 360 degrees. It's crazy good. Ah, I'm getting kinda repetitive now, so yeah, my main point is that I really like this story(and I already |
| Kaskade 2007-11-28 ch 2, | abusewhen r u going 2 update. i really like these kinds of stories w/ main characters that has alot of sass. |
| cheekymonkey2772 2007-11-20 ch 2, | abuseGreat story...u really have a creative imagination for a story plot...but still cliche in a way in which i love...hehe |
| katieo9239 2007-11-16 ch 2, | abuseThat was good. I know the story is on hold, but I hope you write more soon. |
| The Paranoia Kids 2007-10-31 ch 2, | abuseWHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE? Please do not put such an awesome story on hold. |
| Carter 2007-10-30 ch 2, anon. | abusepretty good so far hope you continue to work on it |
| Qzz 2007-10-13 ch 2, | abusehey, this is awesome. it would be sweet if you started writing this again. |
| Mojojuju 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abuseI simply love how you portrayed Mel. Her personality can really radiate from the whole story. Isn't it amazing how simple words can give it so various feelings and emotion? That is why I love words and stories so much. Words can bring out so much more. Writing is truly and art worth developing. I can see you've almost, if not already, mastered it. From your stories that I am reading now, I can clearly see that. All of your characters have such great personalities. They're so contrasting and I find it amazing how you can write about so many different kinds of people, still capturing their way of living and thought perfectly. I recently finished reading the chapters you have from "Second Hand Soda". Awesome. Simply awesome. I love Allie as much as I am beginning to love Melanie. Melanie is so well developped already just in the second chapter. I adore how she can so easily stand up to people and speak her mind not bothering to think about the consequences. That is amazing, although I understand why she simply stopped caring, after all she has been through. Anyways, I need to stop procrastinating on my homework. :] I hope you'll update soon (for both SHS and AIH) because I am really looking forward to reading more of Allie's and Mel's lives. :] Cheerio! -- J. |
| Chandle 2007-08-16 ch 2, | abusehey.. love the storyline.. cant wait for the next chapter :P |
| anonamous 2007-07-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseKEEP WRITING! please? |
| oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE 2007-06-24 ch 2, | abusei like this story. you should defenitly continue! i know you've had it on hold since 2005 but i was hoping you would update... well... you do have it on hold so... cent wait for more CHOCOLATE |
| Ravestna 2007-05-24 ch 2, | abusereally good x X xRavestnax X x |