wow i read this whole thing in one sitting and was kindof upset when i realised i'd already reached the end!

im loving this story, me and my friends went through a similar thing a couple of years ago and i think the way you've captured the emotions and events that all start to pile up really well.

the characters are easy to relate to, the chapters are good lengths and the main events are spread out on a believable timeline, which can be hard to do so congrats on that :)

im adding this story to my favourites, but i noticed the last update was a while ago, does this mean its been shelved? i hope not..

if not, keep doing what you're doing, because its working out great :)

Gah, this makes me wanna play soccer again... I really miss the whole team spirit and camaraderie that comes with being on a team. ;

Anyways, I like the story very much. It's to the point, funny, interesting and entertaining. Can't ask for more. :)

Since it's almost 2 years since your last update I guess you're either on a long break or have given up. I do hope it's the first, but either way I think you've done a great job so far. :D

Hi please please continue updating!

I think you know how to make your characters appear to be very 'real' and this makes you story really interesting as people can relate to the characters and feel for them.

You've not updated for two years! Are you still continuing with the story?

Oh come on! There's no more? Ugh. WRITE MORE!

Okay, I can't ignore two indirect death threats without reviewing, can I? Ch 6 now, and liking it more! I seemed to not have picked up on some things though, like who's out and who's not. I'm guessing Ally is not, but I couldn't figure Piper out, even with the little quip about hot girls on that other team with Kelly. Must've missed something. Anyway, now that my life is safe again, I'll continue reading...

I like it! A bit slow so far (I'm at Ch 2), as in there haven't really been any hints of impending relationships, but it's a good kind of slow. Your writing is comfortable and easy to read. Good job. Gonna keep reading now...

I love this story. You should really try to finish it.

I love this story. You should really try to finish it.

Oh wow, that last line was really symbolic. I loved the chapter and can't wait until you update again! :)

great story so far! don't change a thing. love to see the rest. update soon.

I just finally got around to catching up with your story and what can I say? It's still great. I like how Mel and Kelly are sort of, kinda hooking up but I wonder what'd happen when Mel ges to college? And I'm glad to see Piper finally moving forward with her life and not just doing a stand-still. Lovely update. Looking forward to more! :)

Just wanted to let you know I'm still reading. I liked this chapter. Yeah, it's been awhile, but I understand. I've had the same problem writing lately.

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site so far. I think it's pretty cool that you started writing it in '05 and yet you haven't abandoned it (unlike me). I've always liked soccer

Great chapter! I can't wait until you update again, this is really good and is so cute!

YAY AN UPDATE! WO! *tones down the fangirlishness* I think it's great that Piper and Ally are finally getting serious about things. I also think it's good that Piper is able to be realistic about college, even if she's not being "exactly honest." Yeah, I'm not good at constructive criticism. I'm behind you all the way with this story, so don't get discouraged!