i liked your second n third chapters but i cudn't make head or tail of this one...it is so confusing

i'll be looking forward to the next chapter though...hopefully it'll clear d confusions...

interesting :D
update soon please =3

i realy enjoyed reading this so far, but you gota update please !

that was great!! write more...please?

I realised you weren't updating stories because no one was reviewing, so... You should update this soon! It seems like a good story, where's the rest of the chapters? Hurry...Please?

well...what happens? I was just getting interested! Update soon!tootles!

omg! i really, really luved this story! i heart noir and sol XD! hee hee.UPDATE PWEASE!!

WOW i love the names of your characters... i can't wait to find out whats going on. i feel bad for odette.. she is so outta the loop..

i don't qute understand everything, i think it's best to read the prequal. :)

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I seriously cannot wait to read more. I love all your characters (especially Sol, I think I might have developed a tiny crush). They have such personality. I really hope you update soon :)

Things are making a little more sense now that I've read "The Chronicles of the Five Pillars" I've looking forward to both stories.

Serason

Well, very well done^-^

I really like your stories and your ideas, but the thing with the Pillars was kind of a mood killer to me, I don't know why...maybe because it was to immediate and simply confusing.

I hope you write on soon!

Very interesting! =D

I cant wait for the explanation about Odarette and Odette... Who/What is Palantha?

Holy crap, this story is awesome! I'm like sitting on the edge of my seat, ANTICIPATING in anguish on what's going to happen next. Ahh please update soon! I can't wait to read more. This mystery is KILLING ME!`

this story seems humorous, although i don't think that was the intent of this story. but whatever, i find it interesting