beautiful. the imagery, the description... its stunning. you've made me want to download the song now... which i am :) huzzah to you!

But then I’m greeted by the cruelest nightmare: Reality.--can you saw awesome? i was completely blown away by that. totally. completely. wow...

keep on writing, hun. you deserve all the encouragement you can get. (i've added that line to my profile btw :P) rock on,

~bubblegum

I really liked this thingy. Specially this part: "And you didn't even notice,When the sky turned blue".

The end is freaking awesome too. It made me want to download that song.

I know it's personal, but it's good enough to post it. M... getting some drawing ideas right now...

Love,pam