whoa! big words. me likes.

i like the succinctness of this piece..the use of "jerkoffs" to convey a certain distaste.. lots of big words here as well which may easily detract from the rhythm but fortunately didnt. not sure abt the use of "euphonious"...is it for contrast with the negativity of "pusillanimous", "obloquy" and "bullshit"? do keep writing :D

creative word selection... it works well. i like the "jerkoffs in euphonious tones, yet still it's just/a stream of obloguy." bit. well done, a very nice poem.