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| inxyourxeyes 11/13/05 . chapter 1
whoa! big words. me likes.
| youzi 11/13/05 . chapter 1
i like the succinctness of this piece..the use of "jerkoffs" to convey a certain distaste.. lots of big words here as well which may easily detract from the rhythm but fortunately didnt. not sure abt the use of "euphonious"...is it for contrast with the negativity of "pusillanimous", "obloquy" and "bullshit"? do keep writing :D
| T. Rowland 11/13/05 . chapter 1
creative word selection... it works well. i like the "jerkoffs in euphonious tones, yet still it's just/a stream of obloguy." bit. well done, a very nice poem.