O. You rock at the metaphors! My fave line has to be "To admit that you've fallen from grace/Your only salvation" Awesome poem.

~Leeona Trance

Love the title & the last two lines.. great job

interesting. this is kinda scary, but rather cool. nice imagery.

Han.

very cool, I love it

I like the strong imagery in this. The last line is powerful, and yet in some ways understandable. There's spite there, but at the same time a relationship and sense of understanding. The way you mix the metaphorical image of falling with the 6th floor is good, really unique. Good job.

That's strong. But it's really good, great work.