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| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-02-19 ch 1,  | abusewonderful job for a first poem! (my first should be burned) I love the pairings of words and the feel of it. I think we've all felt like this, and you captured the emotion very well! Keep up the good work! |
| Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseIt was nice. The end really emphisized the whole thing. |
| sunday night sky 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abusethis is good for a first poem! love the repetition at the end. good work, keep writing =) |