Reviews for Friends Forever, Buy Friends For Never

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breezy nostrils 2006-02-02 ch 1,	wow...this really reminds me of the fall out boy song "Champagne for my real friends, and real pain for my sham friends." I don't know if you've ever heard of it. anyway, i love the title, and the honesty of this poem. It screams to me in so many ways. anyway, nice work!
Moondog Dozier 2006-01-15 ch 1,	Very intricately woven together. I like the lines, " Oh why do I know her,-Why do I try,-I think she has forgotten,-Who held up her sky", truly wonderful sound and beat. Good work.
Arichos 2006-01-10 ch 1,	Um...no sense to me, sorry. Kind of jagged.
XxParalaixX 2006-01-06 ch 1,	It's good, the words are good but I don't quite understand what it's about. But I suppose that's the thing about poetry, it doesn't have to mean anything, it can always sound excellent. My advice is to try and get more of what's happening into the words but not if there's no inspiration for it. Just wait and see what happens. I like it-Becky P.s Ajitara knew her daughter had changed her name because of the note she left. she signed it "from Faith (Pitara) or something along those lines. Cya!
in theory 2006-01-03 ch 1,	Interesting, my friend is totally infatuated with Panic! at the disco. I've never listened, so this was refreshing for me..the proper capitals fronting each line give it such strength (I always forget simple things like that lol). It feels vaguely conversational too. Nice balance.
Goddess Aurora 2005-12-05 ch 1,	This poem really feels like a song to me. I escpecially like the title "Friends Forever, Buy Friends for Never."
blossomed blooms 2005-12-02 ch 1,	This is so nice I read each part more than once.And yes, my first instinct was of seeing Hollywood imagery; and when I went back I found the words/ideas that did that...Which is fascinating because I don't know if you intended that. But it does correlate to the weak ties and drama in friendships.Whether they dissolve or not.
youzi 2005-11-22 ch 1,	a lot of cutting lines..raw and emotional...loved the drama of this piece. keep writing :D
FunkyFlower17 2005-11-19 ch 1,	quite nice...luv the song-like quality in this and the flow is beautiful...rhyming is also v. unique...awesome and thanx loads for da reviews, sincerely, ~mez~
boy that you loved 2005-11-19 ch 1,	doing the rounds. you remind me to think of the things people have done and you remind yourself that maybe they don't care? something i found lately was people believe what they want to believe and how naive of me, as ruben would say 'don't lose your faith in human nature jake.' just stoped by to say 'hi' good poem. 'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
It Sounds Horrible 2005-11-19 ch 1,	I love the ending. I think "piggish behavior" should be next to swine. But that is only Lolita's humble opinion. Nice work.
xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-11-19 ch 1,	Reminds me of the conflicts with me and my own friends...I love the imagery, you're always so good with that...keep it up.--pammy-
mizu no kokoro 2005-11-17 ch 1,	wow~ it touched me profoundly~ especially with all the friend troubles i've experienced~ good work keep writing!
citrus scented 2005-11-16 ch 1,	the last stanza is just perfectperfectperfect. the ending line so powerful, this is a wicked piece of work."Weaving between those isles of,Velvet, lights leading our way,"- intense imagery reflects the kind of relationship it was. this is very effective- its like a scrap book of images, and they all seem to have so much meaning. im glad you updated, afraid of disappointment? i know what you mean, I often dont post stuff up for that reason, but im glad you did.
lackluster 2005-11-15 ch 1,	i absolutly adore the last 6 lines. i like how your poetry has this class to it, like no other that i've read on fictionpress. it still has this bitterness to it. and that is amazing.

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