its faye...

Im really excited about this poem too! i havent read any of your stuff in ages. and i guess its so old by now you mightnot want the credit for it. theres not so much angsty intensity, and yea i know how that is. i keep trying to go back to the written word and i get tripped by something

and i tumble over the less gifted youth...

DOsnt it feel like back when we were younger the poets were more impressive and skilled? why is that? lets go deeper...

really like it...love the way you write...hope to see more...cu

i love it the descriptions are fabulous, well done, especially love the last line, its amazing.

lots of loveAC

Yeah, it does sound like my trashy little slut doesn't it? XD Too fun! But wow, I feel so...honored in a dirty way! XD This was fantastic though! - I'm adding you to my shelf...and I shall update Ikiningyou for you! Oh thanks Love, this was spectacular!

HarlequinPlease fix me...

e! you did do a superb job! and it does remind me of mirage! it's brilliant!

I think this is pretty good. A few of the lines seemed a bit too spelled out, you didn't give the reader enough credit, but it was still nicely done. Good work.

Love your descriptions in this: "Cigarette butts, candles of our parody/Needles, exhausted ecstasy telling the floor our secrets" and "Ripped fishnets tell the story of an eternity," just beautiful. Great job.