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Reviews For: Queen of my latent passion

ed-misery
2005-12-10
ch 1,
really like it...love the way you write...hope to see more...cu
AllyCred
2005-11-19
ch 1,
i love it the descriptions are fabulous, well done, especially love the last line, its amazing.

lots of love~AC~
Broken doll on a dirty shel...
2005-11-14
ch 1,
Yeah, it does sound like my trashy little ** doesn't it? XD Too fun! But wow, I feel so...honored in a dirty way! XD This was fantastic though! -^^- I'm adding you to my shelf...and I shall update Ikiningyou for you! Oh thanks Love, this was spectacular!!

Harlequin~Please fix me...
kid in the closet
2005-11-13
ch 1,
e! you did do a superb job! and it does remind me of mirage! it's brilliant!
eighteen hundred
2005-11-13
ch 1,
I think this is pretty good. A few of the lines seemed a bit too spelled out, you didn't give the reader enough credit, but it was still nicely done. Good work.
hey maria
2005-11-13
ch 1,
Love your descriptions in this: "Cigarette butts, candles of our parody/Needles, exhausted ecstasy telling the floor our secrets" and "Ripped fishnets tell the story of an eternity," just beautiful. Great job.
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