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| ed-misery 2005-12-10 ch 1, | really like it...love the way you write...hope to see more...cu |
| AllyCred 2005-11-19 ch 1, | i love it the descriptions are fabulous, well done, especially love the last line, its amazing. lots of love~AC~ |
| Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2005-11-14 ch 1, | Yeah, it does sound like my trashy little ** doesn't it? XD Too fun! But wow, I feel so...honored in a dirty way! XD This was fantastic though! -^^- I'm adding you to my shelf...and I shall update Ikiningyou for you! Oh thanks Love, this was spectacular!! Harlequin~Please fix me... |
| kid in the closet 2005-11-13 ch 1, | e! you did do a superb job! and it does remind me of mirage! it's brilliant! |
| eighteen hundred 2005-11-13 ch 1, | I think this is pretty good. A few of the lines seemed a bit too spelled out, you didn't give the reader enough credit, but it was still nicely done. Good work. |
| hey maria 2005-11-13 ch 1, | Love your descriptions in this: "Cigarette butts, candles of our parody/Needles, exhausted ecstasy telling the floor our secrets" and "Ripped fishnets tell the story of an eternity," just beautiful. Great job. |