|Reviews for Champagne|
| cornered.sensations 3/20/06 . chapter 1
I loved the last line, very well expressed
| Singing After Dark 1/2/06 . chapter 1
Amazing. Very nice poem. Like the imagery. Alot of the time, rhyme gets lost because it sounds forced. But the way you wrote it, it's great. Nice job!
| Ajna 12/11/05 . chapter 1
Wow, beautiful, amazing poem! Perfect to the very last word. :)
| brevis 11/13/05 . chapter 1
so true, so true. you know, i've never read a rhyming poem that worked this beautifully.
| White Tea and Ginger 11/13/05 . chapter 1
Beautifully written and so true. I love how natural these rhymes are. I also loved the term 'metallic words'. Great imagery.
Keep up the great work :).
| hey maria 11/13/05 . chapter 1
You have wonderful diction.
There's a soft bitterness in this that just rises as the poem goes on. I really enjoyed this; great job.
| eighteen hundred 11/13/05 . chapter 1
I liked this, it reminded me of a book I'm reading (Glamorama, Bret Easton Ellis) that's about that sort of lifestyle and the crowded emptiness of it all. I think your piece here captured that feeling fairly well, good work.
| katmonkey 11/13/05 . chapter 1
You need to stop being better than me! The last line is my favourite!