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| Pretty'liDisaster91 2006-12-27 ch 1,   | Please update! I really want to read more! I can really relate to this story! Please update! |
| SoulDesire 2005-12-08 ch 1, | Noo!! The chaoter has ended and in the worst spot too! *pouts* This is very very good; your imagery is spectacular and I can feel the characters feelings as if they were my own. I simply can not wait until you update! |
| Raomina 2005-11-20 ch 1, | This is a short but quite intense first chapter. The descriptions are vivid and there is also suspense to why he was sad. There are no names mentioned yet, which adds to the mystery and anticipation. Even in this short chapter, I can tell that there is a lot of history between these two people; they might even be lovers. They are probably teenagers, but they can also be adults. Anyway, these are all guesswork. Are you going to continue it? It has a potential to become a good story, so update soon. |
| Eresse 2005-11-14 ch 1, | I love way this enraptures the feelings associated with true friendship; and the way you've presented the situation with ambiguity works well because almost anyone can relate to it. A beautiful piece of writing. Keep it up! |
| Talyn Gray 2005-11-14 ch 1, | beautifully written tonya! =] I love how it flowed. The meaning behind this escapes me at the moment >.> *in class* but I shall soon figure it out. =] hopefully... onward hoe with writing! |
| eighteen hundred 2005-11-13 ch 1, | I liked this a lot, how you left a lot of things fairly ambiguous and a nice job with the cliffhanger. |
| Lady of Dreamers 2005-11-13 ch 1, | A true masterpiece of feelings, friendship, and confusing times. We all had to have felt some of these feelings at time; it's enevitable, just as was said in the piece. I wish you good days, Lady |