That's it. I'm convinced. I've added you as a fave author.

Wonderful. I love it.

abby

great opening, and very introspective. i like it! its sad, but also... not at the same time (that makes no sense...>_< sorry!) quiet lines. pretty! -the Lady Elaine

this is lovely, the odd rhyme maintains rhythm and the subject is nice. good work =)

it shows how your mind flows... very cool :)

Beautiful- it describes in wonderful imagery what many of us feel, and the words seem to each have a standing of their own.

I wish you good days,

Lady

I thought this piece was... amazing. Seriously. Very good.

Simply goreous. I love it.