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Getuie 2008-05-05 ch 1,	I wanted to wait until having read 'Exposed' before I made the comment that brought on my reading fest... but then I read 'Exposed' and realised that this poem simply captured it all more for me. Had I allowed it and embraced it, I too would've been where you are now (in this piece... which would 'now' be two years ago). Yet, for me, it didn't and doesn't seem an option... and though I fell (and fall), it's something kept from those closest to me. Maybe it's culture and upbringing, though in my case, upbringing did it's share on creating that 'problem' for me... but it's not something talked of, or accepted in any way, shape or form. But online I've found a few who have found themselves walking in contradiction. I'm sure by now you have as well. But maybe adding an extra voice would give you some support even if we might not have taken to the same path on the matter.
mary 2005-11-27 ch 1,	hey... that's really well written. I can imagine that it must really be frustrating being a "walking contradiction" as you say... you're right, we all have wnadered off the path. I hope that you know that I am trying to "dig beneath" and that even though I might not always know what to "do with you", I still love you a lot and I'm trying to understnad this whole thing better than I do. your "little big sis"
Shadow of Oblivion013 2005-11-13 ch 1,	a strong and powerful poem. i liked it when you used repitition, made the message stronger. personally, i have nothing against homosexuality, but the christians at my school do, and i don't feel like getting into an argument with them cuz of my laziness. please continue to write. in memory of him,~shadow

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