Great, why have I not read this before?: D

Yikes! When did you write all this stuff? I guess all I've got marked for email is your one story (which, btw, you still haven't undated!) I've got a few minutes before my class, so I'll take a look at this one...

1.) "But, no longer is my song of a friend," - this line is awkward, and you don't want that at so vital a point in the poem. It feels like you need a "that" after "song", but of course that would screw up your whole rhyhm. Take a look at it, ok, Daph?

Lovely work, as usual! And a very cute ending. :) Take care of yourself, you busy, busy girl!-Ruatha

This is a really cool poem. I like the smoothness and progression and final ending, it's all very good.

very sweet change of emotion... well done

Aw...how sweet. Love is amazing.