that was very interesting.

btw, are the underlined "o"s in "good" intentional?

I laughed as reading the last part; I think we all see our shadow as more perfect than us. I liked how you portrayed that "Life is Good Enough"- because it *is*, and so many people don't realize this! Life is the most perfect thing ever, because it is the only thing, and we must embrace it in order to truly live and love. I really like this poem- it's going on my favorites list.

Wishing you good days,

Lady

Brilliant! I love the bit of humor at the end; it's perfect

"My shadow has bigger boobs than me." HAHAHAHAHA! OhmyGOD, that is HYSTERICAL! Iv'e always been envious of my shadow- not only does it have bigger boobs, but it's taller and skinnier! It's just not fair, lol. Anyway, great poem, I adore that line. ;)

lmao. loved the last line! relli unexpected. the rest of the poem brought out a relli gud point, our lives are not as bad as the ** we write. l0lz. but i write it newayz. go angst! hmph. mi SHADOW dusnt even hav boobs! lmao. mebe itz coz i dunt... -_-;; keep writing!

Lol, fantastic poem! I like the beginning, yeah, I get that feeling.

Hahahahaha, great ending! Made me laugh.

Great poem, keep writing!

Those damn shadows always get the bigger boobs! I really liked this poem, and I can definitely relate. Great job!

Really good poem. I would use more descriptive, exciting adjectives, but I can't think of any.

Hahahhaa. I'm pretty sure my shadow has bigger boobs and is taller and skinnier than me. Sighh.

Hahaha, aw that last line gave this poem a comic relief I needed. XD It's funny because I have "Hooray for Boobies!" on my screenname right now, so I burst out laughing when I read that. Great poem, it's good to see someone doesn't think life is just this big black abyss. Well done.