You know I absolutely love this piece. It reminds me of a quick ill-fated romance novel. Sort of whispy.

Beautiful use of repitition, it allowed the poem to flow.

Great write.

this is one of those moments when you're glad that you were born in november *tear*... Lol! YA, o ya... this can't get any better. Props, dude =P.

well I think it's beautiful. The sun burning cold...that's such a great sentence.

omg this a brilliant read you ddn't over do but gave enough for the reader to be pulled in

lovly ^_^ keep it up

I like this one! It's surprising how much meaning that simple line can hold. Maybe I'm just tired or something, but I didn't get why you chose that line [I loved her in November] when I read it first! Then as I read more and more, I started thinking, WOW. I love that rainy grey feeling of reminiscence you've put into this!! The repetition worked marvellously! Especially for dense pople like me haha. Such LOVELY writing. Great job! Can't believe I haven't visited your page in so long! Going off to read your other stuff. Yay!:)

Beautifully written.

how is it that everything you write is so amazing it gives me goosebumps?

wow i love this. mainly because november is my favourite month, but your descriptions really nail my feelings on the month perfectly: "When the sun burned cold

And the air tasted of snow". moving, beautiful, elegant and tragic.

Gah! It's so.. ANNA!

(or even ana or anaa)

I love it! Especially the (one, two, three, four...) eighth line. About the rivers... YEAH!

*nod nod nod*

oh man. november is TOTALLY the best month of the year, but i've told you that countless times before.

Beautiful Poe. Very well written!

it's good although the end seems a little weak. i really like the imagery of november though. i'm a fall kind of girl (well, as much as i can be...)

So beautifully sad... I really like how you started every stanza and ended the poem with "I loved her in November." Great piece.

simply an amazing poem. I am left with few words with the awesomeness of the piece. just.so.beautiful.

~* noelle

I know how I feel. This does a wonderful job capturing the emotion of this romance, even though it does not go into detail about it, nor does it need to. Because that wasn't what was important--what was important was the feeling of loving her, in november. And now november is over, and so is that.

Wow I rambled. Anyhow, I enjoyed this. Keep writing.