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all for one
2006-04-05
ch 1,
a agree! being your own person is something that defines who you are. This idea is a common one but one that is not used as much as i think it should be.
Killer Fuzzy Bunny from Hel...
2006-02-08
ch 1,
Hey. I hate the superficial losers, that the only thing they think about is how they look, who's going out with, and what the 'latest' is. They're sheep, all of them. Going to wherever the grass is growing best at the time, and when they've destroyed all of it, they move on to the next place. They're all the same. GO INDIVIDUALISTS!~Kendall
Formerly
2005-11-15
ch 1,
Actually, the fact that you're even bothering to talk about her superficiality and compare it to your clear "superiority" marks you as a member of the new wave of superficiality. Personally, I'd prefer the other girl--you sound annoying, and while the guitar is a plus (girls who play guitar are interesting, as a general rule, unless they're too emo), she's probably hotter.
ode to a firefly
2005-11-15
ch 1,
Wow, that's really quite deep! Very good job. Sometime, though, let me edit it for you and we'll repost it just to get the errors out of the way. :)

~Christine~
Mark F. Newvillage
2005-11-14
ch 1,
i think its best to count your blessings.

care to make reviews on my work?
kp-828
2005-11-14
ch 1,
That is phenomenal. I love this essay... I wish that people would look on hearts and not on appearences... just like you showed in the essay... that although she may look perfect really... she is a superficail person. sad. alright catch ya on the flip side, you dancing-guitar-playing-fool! i love ya! -kp
boys kiss girls
2005-11-13
ch 1,
Haha... "She plays volleyball, I play guitar" great job, buddy! I dont like them either... not a single one! But this is very well written :)
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