O! you rewrote it. its a lot more cool, but wheres the next chaptetr?

Lol im lovin it so far! i'll give ya the book when i see ya next. Later Girl!


~you know who~

Mysterious. I have never really liked egyptian stories, but you play out this one well.

O.O i like this story of your so fare Krissa its really cool let me know if theres going to be a next chapter ^^

"HOLD IT!" Who said that? IS Pyro gonna fall in love with Ashhe? Are they actually gonna kill her? Is there a 'happy ever after' in this one? When are you uploading next? Hurry hurry hurry!

So far, your plot has not revealed itself, but I will make sure I read very carefully. I like Kye though, she seems very powerful for being so small.

Dude... this guy is friggin' whacked out. Who the hell gives his life to place a curse? WHO?!?!

WOW!I mean WOW!I loved it!!

YES!You Did It! You Actually Did It!I Mean I Knew You Would...Eventualy.J/K! You Know I Love You!Update Soon!

Luv Ya! *Lillyania*

HEY!! I love all your stuff. OMG! Anywho, just wanted to say that you and cliffies really seem to get along. Nice detail. Get it published.

Love Shives.