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belle1220
2008-11-03
ch 23,
Oh, this story was even better than Second Chances. Callie and Jeremiah were so sweet and made me swoon!

I want to continue reading Guarding Love, but it's not finished. Any chance you'll start updating it again?
Insane plus Insomniac makes...
2008-10-30
ch 23,
HOw sweet! I love it. I;m starting on the rest of the series now. Callie is witty.
givelove.thentakeitaway
2008-08-13
ch 5,
I'd like to ask you if I can put this story on my website that recommends stories for people to read. I've got it up there already, but if it's a problem, I can take it off. I want you to know that I really like this story. I'm just starting it up, that's why there isn't much on it. If you could recommend it to readers, that would be cool. If not, then it doesn't really matter. Here's the link: /givelove-thentakeitaway/
tehcrazykatlady
2008-08-06
ch 23,
Hah, that was awesome.

The characters were great as was the script.
It's also kinda cool to be able to read a story with morals and no need to skip over segments of text. ;p

I enjoyed immensely, good job.
Shadow Possession
2008-05-09
ch 23,
Aww! That was so sweet! The story's awesome! I've enjoyed reading this and thanks for the awesome read!
PJC Macall
2008-03-14
ch 23,
love love love it!
collegestudent
2008-02-15
ch 1,
For some reason fictionpress doesn't want to let me PM you, so here goes... Will you be updating "Guarding Love" soon? I can't wait for a new chapter! I just visited your website and tried to buy the Mara story, but the google checkout link wouldn't work. Is there a reason for that? Thanks!
Saved By Blood
2007-11-03
ch 23,
Hands down, my favorite story. It's so cute and fun. I wish life was really like this, where everything just worked out. I read this about two years ago and I just never reviewed. I really should read it again, and I will, but I need to have more time. So anyway, this is the best story I've read on here. I love it!
Stang65
2007-02-22
ch 23,
Hey!! I absolutely LOVED this story. It was cute and playful, and yet it had me crying... You did a superb job here. I am so looking forward to reading Isaiah and Tara's story next!
Highlands
2007-02-02
ch 23,
lovely!
Kylie1403
2006-12-04
ch 5,
o0o a chapter i didnt review! theres a reason why i post this tehehe

im re reading this story because i LOVE it so0o0o0o mcuha nd i reliesed a mistake you have in chapter 6

“Lesson Number Three,” she said, unclenching her hands and sliding them to his neck.

“What happened to Four?”

She grinned. “We’re skipping it for now. I’m more into class participation.”


Instead of four dont you mean two??
What is the point of a stor...
2006-09-05
ch 11,
I live in Alaska, Anchorage though, but I have family that lives in Palmer and it is awesome to read stories based in where you lived! (For some odd reason Alaska doesn't seem to have many...hahaha :) ) It's great so far.
Izzaliza
2006-08-28
ch 1,
I absolutely love this story and I have decided to read it again!
ellinikolouloudi
2006-08-16
ch 23,
awesome story! I read the entire thing in one sitting after I happened across it on a search. Great job. I hope you continue the series you are planning.
Kait Dunn
2006-07-22
ch 23,
I suppose it's time I left you a review; I've read the first two stories in this series without one.

When I read Second Time Around, I noticed it wasn't the type of thing I usually read, but I would be lying if I said I wasn't surprised. This series altogether has a refreshingly new taste. You aren't a racy writer and you don't use expletives or highly promiscuous themes. That was something I was not used to in FP stories.

One thing that I noticed immediately was the focus on God and Christianity. I am Agnostic and have been for a year or two, so reading stories focusing on God and/or Christianity is always a little iffy for me. However, I am relieved to say that you don't come off as preachy-preachy. You aren't shoving anything in anybody's face or forcing down the reader's throat. I read in CH. 20, I think it was, that you were worried about this. Please, don't be. You have a fine balance of Religion and Story.

Although I notice a few grammar and format errors, the writing is simplistic and the characters are just plain good. You center on Family and Love in this story, which, again, is refreshing.

Overall, you're doing a good job, and I can't wait to see more, although I do have a question: What is the time period for this series?

Ciao, D.S. Cillian
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