This has a lot of great imagery and you did a great job on this piece.

Very relatable. Sad (angry?), but good. Please keep writing. Oh, and feel free to read some of mine if you get a chance. I have some like these, or at least about cutting.

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*

I know how this feels, to feel like cutting is your only way to get thing's out, I do the same and sometimes I hate myself for it, but this is really wll written.

Hi Kate! Thanks for the review.

This poem of yours is well written. The imagery is vivid enough to make the readers realize the condition in which the persona is involved. The words are effectively used. The question at the end causes your message to stay in my mind.

Rock on! And just tell me if you want me to review a particular work of yours.

Doray

Not my way of hating everything, but a way of showing written, very well done. Don't hate everything; it's so tiring, you need so much energy to do it, and the people you hate might even hate you so you're doing them a description; i could see what you were doing as the poem went on. well done indeed!