powerful poem. i like the style of this, the short verses are v effective

wow! good!

can't wait to read more of ur writing! it is so hard to keep up with u!

luv ya

~kara~

Very cool :)

*hug* im sorry it had to backfire. =(

as a piece of literature - this is really good!! i guess its all the emotion huh? but really really good!

as a friend - i wish i could help some way. :(