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| a silenced revolution 2007-04-10 ch 1,   | I like the sarcasm and the bitterness. And especially the lines "Let’s face the fact I’m a failure I can’t act My way out of the truth" I can relate to that feeling. Good work, keep writing. |
| in theory 2006-01-07 ch 1, | (I read your bio, and I think this already is 75% as deep as it could be. Whatever level of meaning you're striving for, you hit it hard here, and definitely inspired me.) Creative original thought is hard..everyone seems to have done it first. But there's something unusual about your stamp. I'd say pretty good interesting nice well done etc but that's so boring, I liked it yes but you don't need to know that (and if you do, then you do); I'm trying to say you spoke out loud to me with this. |
| P.Lin 2005-11-14 ch 1, | I like your poem, it's interesting. |