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| breezy nostrils 2006-02-11 ch 1,   | i don't know...you just described society in a nutshell. how about the title should be "society in a nutshell" anyway, i love love the imagery especially the second stanza. nice work! |
| persian eyes 2005-11-25 ch 1, | hi!! (:finally, i review back. laughs. anyway, this is actually pretty good. i like the calvinklein boyfriend and glorified tiffanytragic. very nicely put across. embodies the typical teen angst in our current society. hugs and kudos for the review. create05 is this thing my church is holding where you submit your art and songs and basically anything creative, and it'll be shown on Heart Awards. haha. smiles and love. |
| lackluster 2005-11-15 ch 1, | this is actually really great. i hope your write more soon. i adore stanza #2. |
| twenty-second seduction 2005-11-14 ch 1, | Ooer, lovely.It really is. Kudos. |
| poetic abortion 2005-11-14 ch 1, | what can I say? clever and brillant just don't fit, it something FAR from that. ~* noelle |
| kdoll. 2005-11-14 ch 1, | it's a good reflection |