|Reviews for ephemeral love|
| the big sleep 12/17/05 . chapter 1
I'm actually jealous of this one.
| Lines To Time 12/14/05 . chapter 1
What a cool way to write! The poem as a literal representation of the subject. I think I'll have to try that sometime :-P. Beautiful, love.
| Ajna 12/10/05 . chapter 1
Interesting, I really liked this. :)
| no.peace.los.angeles 12/1/05 . chapter 1
I love that first line! I don't know what it is about it, but the 'rhyming in white' part just really caught me. Great job! Keep writing! :)
| Miaa4ever 11/23/05 . chapter 1
I really like that word, contritely. It sounds so... i don't know... like a british guy embracing you or something... I know, I have a weird imagination. Thank you for your review, It made me feel really happy, since I was having real trouble with those first 2 lines. Keep writing!
| WormsofCharacter 11/15/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I love the imagery. I absolutely adore poems that I want to read over and over again cause the words taste so good. I just wanted to thank you for telling me how to get spaces between my stanzas, but I think I may have found a new favourite poet. Keep writing.
| sunday night sky 11/14/05 . chapter 1
lovely. cryptic - different interpretations for every reader. nice job.
| Faithless Juliet 11/14/05 . chapter 1
"tell the sun we'll rid ourselves of our naked skin."-I love that line; the sun is such a powerful "thing" as well as a metaphore. It really brings an empowering picture to ones mind when thinking of defying it.