You said in your summary that this was an "angry" song, and I see that, but to me this song speaks more of bitterness and vengeance than anger. Maybe it's just me. I loved the song anyway, keep on writing!

Great song, powerful lyrics. I like this a lot, well done. QueenVixta

indeed i can. well written to be able to tell that, but you give it away with the title. still a bluidy good poem

Very good. I say you keep on getting better with each song posted. I can feel your emotions through this song.

Thanks for the review. I love this, very cool.

"I’m a shadow puppet of despair"

Favorite line.

Nice song - very angsty, lol.

"I’m a shadow puppet of despair" My favourite line ;-D

Nice song, I like, as always! Keep writing!

Well done, Master!

One of these days.. we should get together and record these songs _

Whoah...this is really incredible..."I’m a shadow puppet of despair" I love that line...but I'm sowwy about what happened to you :(

-freak from the corner

I love the poem, it is very good, but I hate that you are upset.

o..i like this one...very passionate...

I love this, very beautiful, excellent work