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| Cool-Ruzz 2005-11-15 ch 1, | ** good..seriously. Its so well written and was absolutely beautiful!! Well done..keep writing! Because ur worth it.. |
| Ajax Elpis 2005-11-14 ch 1, | Good title, good begining, and good thought process. This title gave a feeling of hopelessness which I thrive off of and love. It had just a little bit of a "forced to work for rhyming" feeling, but not much of one. The images came off well and sounded better. Awesome job. Keep it up. |
| The Postscript 2005-11-14 ch 1, | Beautiful...great title as well. Keep writing. |