Impressive, go you and your neice. Very succinct (I like that word a lot lately)and powerful.

Awe,that is such a sweet poem. Short and beautiful.

i'm not sure i like the last line... i think the questions would be awesome jsut by themselves

Wow. And she's only twelve? This is very good. Make sure to tell her that.

heck, thats wonderful for a 12 year old! Beautiful work!